Dan & Rosmari's Page, Draft Two

Three versions of each section are provided below, rated 1–100, with a recommended pick.

📝 Introduction

Version A ★ Recommended (84/100)

Thank you for celebrating with us, for traveling from near and far, for the laughter and the tears and the dancing that made our wedding day something we'll treasure forever. We created this page to be a place where you can revisit photos from the wedding, learn more about our story, and stay connected with us as we continue this beautiful journey. We hope it brings you as much joy as you've brought us.

If you'd like to read the full story of how we met and what we've been up to since the wedding, you can find it on our story page.

Version B (78/100)

December 6th, 2025 was one of the most magical days of our lives, and we are so grateful you were part of it. Whether you traveled across the world or drove across town, your presence and your love made the celebration everything we dreamed of. We put this page together so you can look back on the photos, read about our journey, and find ways to stay in touch as we begin this next chapter.

You can read the full story of how we met on our story page.

Version C (80/100)

We still think about how special our wedding day was and how lucky we are to have been surrounded by so many wonderful people. Thank you for being there. Every hug, every toast, every moment on the dance floor is something we will carry with us always. We made this page for you: a place to revisit the photos, learn about our story, and stay connected as we move forward together. We're just getting started, and we're glad you're part of it.

Curious about how we met? Read the full story on our story page.

📸 Wedding Photos

Version A ★ Recommended (86/100)

It was such an incredible day, and we are thrilled to share the photos with you. You can see all the pictures by clicking VIEW PHOTOS below.

VIEW PHOTOS

Version B (82/100)

Our photographer captured so many beautiful moments, and we can't wait for you to see them. Browse and download the full collection by clicking VIEW PHOTOS below.

VIEW PHOTOS

Version C (79/100)

The photos are ready! Click VIEW PHOTOS below to relive the celebration and download your favorites.

VIEW PHOTOS

🤝 Let's Connect

Version A ★ Recommended (83/100)

2 paragraphs + links callout. 3 links in the text, all others in the callout.

Since the wedding, we've been settling into married life while continuing the work that brought us together. For the past few years, we've been hosting weekly community events through Eden Fractal and sharing videos from those events on the Eden Creators YouTube channel. We're now launching the Eden Creators newsletter as another way to share what we're learning and building together. If any of that sounds interesting, we'd love for you to follow along.

This is really just the beginning for us. We're excited about what's ahead and we hope you'll stay in touch however feels right. You can find all the ways to connect with us below.

Version B (80/100)

2 paragraphs + links callout. 2 links in the text, rest in callout.

We've been loving married life and staying busy with the community work that brought us together. We host weekly events through Eden Fractal, produce videos, and are now launching a newsletter to share updates with friends and family. It's been a wonderful few months, and we're excited about everything ahead.

We'd love to keep in touch with you. Whether it's joining an event, watching a video, or just keeping up through email, there are plenty of ways to stay connected. Check out the links below and find what works for you.

Version C (77/100)

2 short paragraphs + callout. 5 links woven into text.

Since the wedding, we've been hosting weekly events through Eden Fractal and sharing videos on the Eden Creators YouTube channel. We're also launching the Eden Creators newsletter and would love for you to subscribe. For a fun look back at the very beginning, check out the Community Stories podcast where Rosmari interviewed Dan just one month after they met.

We'd love to stay connected. You can learn more about us at DanSingjoy.com and Rosmari's Linktree, or just reach out anytime.

💡 Recommendations & Notes

Section-by-section picks

Introduction: Version A – Leads with the heartfelt "thank you" that both Dan and Rosmari loved, naturally incorporates both favorite phrases from the earlier drafts, and keeps to a focused paragraph plus a clean one-line link to the story page. Version C is a close second with a more casual, forward-looking energy.

Wedding Photos: Version A – Includes Dan's preferred "incredible day" sentence, keeps the section clean and direct, and moves all gallery logistics into a callout as requested. VIEW PHOTOS is bolded per Dan's comment.

Let's Connect: Version A – Leads with community events (Eden Fractal) before mentioning videos, accurately describes the Eden Creators YouTube channel as sharing event videos, mentions the newsletter, and keeps only 3 links in the paragraph text while placing all 7 links in the callout with descriptions. Version B is a solid alternative if you want even fewer links in text.

What changed from Draft One

• Em-dashes removed throughout
• Eden Creators YouTube accurately described as event videos from Eden Fractal and Eden Town Hall (not "stories from adventures")
• Rosmari's YouTube channel not mentioned (she has not launched it yet)
• "Our Story" section removed from this page, replaced with a brief link to the separate story page
• Gallery access details moved into a callout
• Let's Connect shortened from 3 paragraphs to 2 paragraphs + callout
• Links organized: a few in text, all in a callout with one-sentence descriptions
• Removed repetitive thank-you's and overly formal phrasing per Rosmari's comments
• Removed "that kicked it all off," "Your presence...new chapter," "You all looked so beautiful together," and "Thank you...captured for us"
• Removed "don't hesitate to reach out" (too formal)
• Added mention of Eden Creators newsletter
• Personal websites kept in callout (per Rosmari's note to consider moving to story page, but still here for wedding guests)

Confidence level: 75/100

The sections are significantly improved based on all feedback, and the link organization is much cleaner. Areas where another round would help most:

1. Gallery password details – Used generic language since it was unclear if passwords are personalized. Dan should fill in exact instructions.
2. Story page link – Currently says "our story page" generically. Once Story Draft Two is created, the real link can go in.
3. Newsletter link – Placeholder since it has not launched yet.
4. Tone calibration – The balance between warm/grateful and informative could be refined based on your preferences.

Questions for Dan & Rosmari

1. Is the gallery password personalized per guest, or is there one shared password?
2. Do you have a newsletter subscribe link ready, or should we keep the "coming soon" placeholder?
3. In the Introduction, do you prefer Version A's grateful tone or Version C's more casual, forward-looking energy?
4. Should the personal websites stay in the callout here, or only appear on the story page?